Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 4 It's a cold rainy day at the kingdom of Elegand. The sky has been a pale grey all day with a cold breeze blowing through. This is the type of weather one would rather stay inside drinking something warm.Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 4 by ~NeutraStaff
On today Lief wanting to be by himself, decides to take a walk outside. He wears a long woven pale colored trench coat and walks past the stables looking on to the large pine tree forest areas. He moves on eastward to a more grassy area. Along the way Lief looks up as the rain comes down. 'I don't mind being out here in the rain like this,' he thinks to himself, 'it helps me to relax with it's calming effect and nature. I hopes that
Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 3 (the festival) In the last weeks of festival preparations, Lief and the palace workers go into town to help with the finishing touches. The day of the festival finally arrives. The streets are elaborated decorations, flower reefs strung up across the buildings and colorful banners above on banners, flapping in the wind. Different stands are set up featuring carnival type games and food stands serving cooked meat and sweets like cakes and candy. Throughout the day people gather in the streets cheering and making loud noises.Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 3 (the festival) by ~NeutraStaff
It's later afternoon and from the palace comes many knights on white horses escorting a red and gold colored chariot. The char
Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 2 It's been a few days since Lief and Arianna began to bond. After work, Lief escorts Arianna around the palace, showing her special places. While together, they spend most of the time talking about how their day went, until one day in the indoor courtyard, Lief gets curious.Medieval Story Plus: Chapter 2 by ~NeutraStaff
"So just out of curiosity, where did you come from?"
"Oh, I come from the east, the far east."
"The east, never been anywhere as far as you implied. What did you like to do in the east, what were your hobbies?"
"Both me and my brother Aiden, we use to ride horses together out in the fields."
"Hey so you say you and your brother were both peasants on the streets be
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I really like it! There were a lot of errors, but I understand your reason. I do the same. xD Just splatter all your thoughts down and don't bother with the editing till your done with the draft. The puncuations as the people are speaking though, should be within the quote rather than outside, and a new paragraph should be made for each new speaker, or else it get's a bit confusing on whose saying what.
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